Interesting composition.Great line work on her flesh. I would have spent a touch more time to darken in the black spaces of the coffin, like under her right fingertips. Maybe put a touch more depth into her hair and face?? I hope you don't mind me saying.
Hey! Thanx! The lighter place under the fingers is not dark, to have more depth. It should not be black completely. On the hair and the face maybe a bit more highlighting could be done. In my defense, it is a sketchbook piece, made traveling around (this one was done in the train and in a pub).
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